MoonClan Leader

[b]Hey, no offence to anyone out there, but I think I should be the MoonClan leader. I may have just gotten on this game, but I have read every single warriors book, the field guid, and the mangas. If you like this idea, put a * and comments and why. If not, put a # and comment and why. Thanks!

You kinda have to Post a descrip of your cat so we can see if she/he fits moonclan for a leader. I bet ocean and Bella will be fine with it, though. And bienvenue.

Here's a little about me:
Gender: female
Personality: kind, but easily angered, also very determined. Wants clan to be strong, and not afraid to lose lives for protecting clan. She has somr dislikes to SunClan, although blends together ok with OceanClan. Will not risk lives of warriors, very affectionate, and acts like she has responsibility. Scarred by eagle when a kit, givving her her warrior name and her name: Eagleswoop. Is not usually aggressive, but fierce and not a cat you would want to meet when angry. Will protect clan at all costs.
If a cat has attacked her clanmates, she will not rest until they have been punished. Has great inner thoughts.

She has strong legs and sharp eyesight. Has good battle instincts and keen senses, VERY HARD TO SNEAK UP ON. Expert at hunting, lightweight, slim, and small, but big enough to protect herself from badgers, foxes, and other dangerous animals.
Not many cats know because of her mysterious, sly, and sneaky ways that her sibling, Fadedmoon survived and was made deputy. Fadedemoon is now Fadedstar, and they both hav not lost any lives yet.
Thanks everyone who made a suggestion for me!

Now all you need is a tiny bit more of the physical descrip and u will be perfect.

I like her, Eaglestar!
I think she would make a good leader-but make sure she matches how Moonclan behaves, mysterious, smart, sly, neutral and wise. Maybe by adding those things and some more Moonclan stuff she would make a perfect leader.
You can be the leader though. I was going to make Fadedstar the leader but she can be your deputy so when you die or retire she can be the leader because by then people will be able to have two leaders.
COOL!
If that is okay wioth you Tigerstar.

What if they are twins? Would you mind if you edited it a bit to say instead of the other siblings dying that Fadedmoon survived and you two made moonclan?

THAT WOULD BE SOOOOOOOO COOL OF AN IDEA!
Maybe we could after Fadedstar leaves to help one of the new clans or stuff that Eaglesatr becomes leader againg or something like that. Whatever I said before

I hogu honor Autumnstar is going to switch clans? Fadedstar is just going to either be shared leader or deputy. Joo choose

hey, Tigerstar and Oceanstorm, great idea! I'll add that immediatly! Thank you both so much!

Eaglesatr can be your big sister or your same age but oklder or something like that. When Eagle die you can be the leader with Faded and then Autumn can help guide the two new clans (whichever you want) with her wisdom and leaderness. When they come out of course wo she won't be dead but Icedragon could still be leader. But Autumn would have to become a warrior to help guide the new leaders and warriors and stuff with the clans and such.
It was cobnfusing but I reread the post and pieced the mystery together!

Awesome!!! But I think the bond could be closer if they were the same age

That is what i meant-twins but Eaglestar is a little older or maybe vice verus.

I don't mind who is older, really.

Welcome to the sie,btw. I voteD for you.

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Panthereyes wrote:I voted for you to be the leader, but your character has a few unrealistic traits. One of them was when you said this: "Has great inner thoughts, and knows when the truth is being told." No one, even in fantasy, always knows when someone is telling the truth, or lying. Even in stories with magic or telepathy, in every realistic story it is not impossible to trick the one who can tell when others are telling the truth. A better thing to say would have been that she usually knows when the truth is being told. The other unrealistic thing that you said was that "no cats can sneak behind her." You could say that she was very hard to sneak up on, but not that no cat could. If she was sleeping, especially if it was a deep sleep, or if she was paying a lot of attention to something else, realistically it would not be impossible to sneak up on her. But other than that I think she is a good character.

Well,I think that was what she meant.

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Fadedstar is the double-leader of moonclan:
Fadedmoon is a light delicate she-cat with extremely dark jet black fur on her back that fades to a medium dark grey on her stomach. She has brown stripes all over her body that fade with the black, (they get lighter brown at the stomach but dark on her spine). She has bright icy-blue grey eyes and extra long claws, but her fangs are normal. She is an amazing hunter, but doesnt like to fight and is very bad at it. She is an amazing tracker, and has great battle tactics, and is not the best climber at all. Fadedmoon is a very smart cat, and a bit shy, but she has a very dry sense of humor. She may be small, but if you get on her bad side, you are in for a torrent of verbal abuse. She hates to be disrespected and will never let a cat walk all over her. Fadedmoon is a fair leader and tries to be as just as possible, and has never lost a clan fight before.(Fadedstar of moonclan)

i did not make this up

Double leader meaning she will become leader when Eaglestar dies or retires-for right now she is the deputy!

Oceanstorm wrote:Double leader meaning she will become leader when Eaglestar dies or retires-for right now she is the deputy!

Actually, Oceanstorm, Fadedstar is also a leader along with Eaglestar, AND IT WAS NOT ME WHO SUGGESTED THAT FADEDSTAR WILL BE A CLAN LEADER WITH EAGLESTAR. I think it was either Bellastar or Tigerstar, or both. Read my descrip

I really don't mine if she's a deputy, or a double leader, either one is fine.

I said before that Fadedstar(Currently Fadedmoon) is the deptuy and that you Eaglestar are/is the leader of Moonclan. Once Eaglestar dies or retires or whatever then Faded will become the leader. They are both twin sisters though but I think that Fadedmoon is a little older than Eaglestar-despite the fact that Eagle is the leader!